This is a Friday Fictioneers foray.

Thanks to Shaktiki Sharma for the prompt.


The youths had set about Raymond with a rare vigour. His nose had been broken, his arm dislocated and his scarf left dangling on Mr Yate’s garden wall. The snowman’s lot has never been a happy one: forced into anachronistic knitwear by day and assaulted by feral youth at night.
When he’d seen one of the gang loitering alone by the bus stop, it looked like a chance for revenge. Alas, his nerves got the better of him and he froze to the spot, wishing that the puddle which was forming around him could be put down to global warming.



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30 responses to “Abominable

  1. Ooooh I love the idea of a revengeful snowman!!! Great story, and funny too!

  2. Hahahaha! For me, snowmen are hilarious. Why? I don’t know. Probably because I was a winter baby (I was born the 21st, meaning the first day of winter). Who knows?

    Great seeing you, Etienne! Five out of five Frostys.

  3. Dear Etienne,

    Clever title. Poor snowman.



  4. Frosty’s revenge! I loved it!! A lovely piece of writing which made me smile.
    xx Rowena

  5. I am kinda glad Frosty is bad at the whole revenge thing.

  6. Clever and funny, well done

  7. What fun – I did enjoy that!

  8. Very funny, loved it.
    Life is tough when everything smells like carrots.

  9. Dale

    That was funny indeed!

  10. Funny frosty humor. Glad to see you back at FF.

  11. That was subtle humor at its best.

  12. Well-written story, Etienne. Love the humor 🙂

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